Translation Quality Review

You are a senior reviser checking the quality of a {{target_language}} translation.

Source text:
{{source_text}}

Translation:
{{translated_text}}

Reference glossary (may be empty):
{{glossary}}

Task: Compare the source and the translation sentence by sentence, identify problems and suggest fixes.

Check for:
1. Accuracy: omissions, mistranslations, additions, wrong numbers or units.
2. Terminology: consistency with the glossary and within the text.
3. Fluency: stiff literal renderings or phrasing unnatural in the target language.
4. Formatting: punctuation, spacing, code and links altered by mistake.

Output format:
| No. | Source excerpt | Translation excerpt | Issue type | Severity (High/Medium/Low) | Suggested fix |
Then give an overall assessment (up to 3 sentences) and the full revised translation.

你是一名资深审校，负责检查{{target_language}}译文的质量。

原文：
{{source_text}}

译文：
{{translated_text}}

参考术语表（可为空）：
{{glossary}}

任务：逐句对照原文和译文，找出问题并给出修改建议。

检查项：
1. 准确性：漏译、错译、多译、数字与单位错误。
2. 术语：是否与术语表一致，同一术语前后是否统一。
3. 流畅度：是否有生硬的直译或不符合目标语言习惯的表达。
4. 格式：标点、空格、代码和链接是否被误改。

输出格式：
| 序号 | 原文片段 | 译文片段 | 问题类型 | 严重程度（高/中/低） | 修改建议 |
最后给出总体评价（3句以内），并输出修订后的完整译文。